Saturday, August 22, 2009

My Life Plot!!

I was 2 years old, visiting my grandparents' house. My brother and I went out to play in the playground in front of our house. We played and played until I got tired and went on a bench, fell asleep.

I guess my brother's friend came to play with him, while I was asleep. Sam went to his friend's house, totally forgetting about me.
When I woke up from my nap, my brother was GONE! I cried and cried until someone came to me and sent me to the police station.

My grandmother came to the playground, saw that we were missing, and she panicked. But thankfully, the woman who took me to the police station was there. My grandmother asked that lady, told the lady how i looked what i wore, and the woman told my grandmother where she took me.

After picking my brother up from his friend's house, and went straight to the police station that I was in.

When she arrived, there I was eating a bread with one hand and on the other hand holding a milk.

1 comment:

  1. I am guessing that each paragraph is supposed to reflect a different part of the plot structure? What is the conflict? I think you have a reasonable understanding of plot structure, but it is a bit difficult to tell from what you have here.

    PS- I am glad that you were okay! I would imagine that your grandma was really scared.

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